Sunday, July 8, 2012

Flicker of Inspiration: Tell a story in 11 words

This post is in response to The Lightning and the Lightning Bug link-up. Their prompt this week asked that you tell a story in exactly 11 words. Since it is summer and we are heading to the beach soon, my mind drifted to this picture of our son I took last year. Here we go!


Matching toes with water’s edge.
Eyes locked on one goal.
JUMP!


9 comments:

  1. I love it! My sons always have that same goal - no matter where they are. Beautiful photograph, too!

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  2. I love this. Perfect words for summer wave jumping!

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  3. Great! Having the photo just seals the deal!

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  4. Wow! This is awesome! Perfect story, perfect picture.

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  5. Oh, I used to LOVE to jump waves just like that. I adore that first line...I can almost feel the water creeping up on me! Great job!

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  6. So great, so fun, so SUMMER!!!
    Great writing and great picture!

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  7. I absolutely love this :) I haven't been brave enough to try any of the Lightning Bug prompts. Maybe this one, lol. But anyway, loved yours :) And the photo was adorable, too! Very creative.

    Happy writing!
    M.J. Wille, author

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